<p>This is a very interesting manuscript, however, there are still some important points that I need to address:</p><p>- I cannot see the research gap in the introduction part. The empirical gap is not clear as well</p><p>- The literature review part is very limited. Author (s) should add more references in this part to see author(s)' theoretical lense. </p><p>- the methodology is too short. No specific information is provided</p><p>- the discussion part is also missing. This should be an important point in the manuscript. There is no interpretation of the research result. </p><p>- There are still many references which are not included on the bibliography and vice versa</p><p>- Overall, although the topic is interesting but it lack of many important things in the manuscript.</p><p>- The total page is up until 15 pages, this manuscript is only 8 pages long. There are still many space to explore the findings.</p>