jbm@fe.unpad.ac.id
Egi Firmansyah:

I have now completed my review of "THE IMPACT OF BUSINESS MOTIVATION, BUSINESS COMPETITION,   BRAND QUITY ON BUSINESS DEVELOPMENT WITH RELIGIOSITY AS MODERATING VARIABLE  (Case Study UMKM Actors in Semarang District)" for Jurnal Bisnis dan Manajemen, and submitted my recommendation, "Resubmit for Review."

First, the authors need to enhance their English writings particularly the grammar structures of a sentence and the logics of the paragraph. Second, the authors need to improve the discussion of the literature review by adding some relevant literatures on the subject. 

Regards,

Yudi Ahmad Faisal
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Jurnal Bisnis dan Manajemen
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