There are some issues that should be taken into the considerations of author(s):
(1) The previous studies and underlying theories that specifically describe the association between one independent variable with the dependent variable on each, should be presented before the hypotheses formulation.
(3) On the methodological sections, please add the criteria of purposive sampling that the author(s) used in this study. It is also important to explain about the type of data employed whether the author(s) used cross-sectional data or panel data for the study, and how many observations used in this study. The method of data estimation in the regression is also important to be revealed. (4) on the Section of Results and Discussions. please give the reasons why the findings are in accordance with theories/previous studies or why the findings do not fit with the theories or previous studies. Please do it accordingly on all results. Thanks