jbm@fe.unpad.ac.id
Dear Dini Hamidin:

We have reached a decision regarding your submission to Jurnal Bisnis dan Manajemen, "OUTSOURCING SUPPLY CHAIN: SYSTEMATIC LITERATURE REVIEW ON INNOVATION DRIVER FACTORS TOWARDS COLLABORATIVE NETWORK".

Our decision is: Revisions Required
The following are the comments from our reviewer. Please revise the manuscript as suggested by our reviewer.



The technical aspect of systematic literature review (SLR) looks fine. However, it is highly unclear: why need this SLR?

 
Intro:

- Better not to start with SLR but establish the territory and strong reasoning why need this SLR?

- Quite confusing, is it about innovation and collaboration? Or about outsourcing the supply chain? Or about innovation driver? Or about the collaborative network? Or about it all? If about that all topic, the SLRs become blurry

 

Method:

- In general, looks fine, the authors follow PRISMA protocol

- Why choose those databases?

- Why 2015 to 2020? Why not open timeframe?

- Why conference proceedings included?

- How the quality of articles assessed?

- Why those keywords?

- How the data analyzed? Why?

 

Results and discussion:

- Descriptive result is fine

- Highly unclear how 6 innovation trends identified

- Further, the 6 trends are cliché, all are the usual term/jargon in the innovation field, nothing new and unique

 

Conclusion:

- Unclear

- No limitations, no further directions


Egi Arvian Firmansyah
SCOPUS ID: 57216978125, Universitas Padjadjaran
egi.firmansyah@unpad.ac.id
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Jurnal Bisnis dan Manajemen
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