<pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext=""><span lang="en">Dear Authors,</span></pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext=""><span lang="en">Judging from the topic and systematic writing the article meets the qualifications to be published in JBM, but it still needs improvements related to several things, namely: </span></pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext=""><span lang="en">1. Improve the English used, you should do proofread first. 2. Improve abstract and write abstract in Bahasa too. </span></pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext="">3. In the introduction sharpen the urgency of the research, research problems haven't stated clearly. </pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext="">4. Improve how to do quotes, especially quotes from print and electronic media and online. </pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext="">5. The Conclusion should be an answer of research problem.6. The discussion section has not elaborated with the resultsof previous research and existing theories. </pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext="">7. Suggestions must be relevant to the findings in the research results.</pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext=""> </pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext="">Regards,</pre><pre id="tw-target-text" class="tw-data-text tw-ta tw-text-small" dir="ltr" data-placeholder="Translation" data-fulltext="">Section Editor</pre>