<p>The objective written in the first section is not consistent with the method used in this study, please revise the statement.</p><p>The literature review section has not given any clear explanation about the concept / theories used in this research.Please explore more about this. Find several past studies, and explain more thoroughly each concept that is used with analytical manner, so the reader will understand why those are chosen for this research.</p><p>For the theoretical / conceptual framework, because of lack of explanation, it is difficult to understand why the author bring that hypotheses. (it s not consistent with the explanation, maybe it needs to be more comprehensively explained- with more analytical manner).</p><p>Please check the the analysis unit, is it the place or the tourist? If the research only have one unit for the unit of analysis (in this term, Geopark Cilteuh), then you can not use quantitative-verification method. You can use case study instead (descriptive statistic explanation to describe a case).</p><p>Please explain more about the instrument development in the Method section.</p><p>This paper has lack of discussion part. Please discuss more.</p><p> </p><p> </p>